Know the Novel Part 2: WE ARE FLYING (Knife in the Back)

by - November 14, 2022


 

1. How’s the writing going overall?

I'm at 98,000 words as I type this! I'm very very excited--I haven't written a book longer than 80-85k in literal years. Not since 2019. So the fact that I've still, in fact, got it is thrilling. 


2. What’s been the most fun aspect about writing this novel so far?

Getting to delve DEEP into these characters' psyches has been amazing. I'm juggling six POVs from the very get-go this time around, which I don't normally do until the later books of a series (for reference, while the first Pentegreens book initially had 2 main POVs and two secondary POVs, the fourth one had seven). But I'm messing with people of a lot of different kinds, and it's been so fun to work with characters with vast emotional ranges.


3. What do you think of your characters at this point? Who’s your favorite to write about?

I love all of my characters. I think my favorite overall is probably Aver--his character arc is so distinct from everyone else. Aver is a little cinnamon roll boy, who's getting the fantasy equivalent of his Ph.D. and got stuck working in the assassin clans in the meantime. He's an investment and he knows it, but he's happy to just focus on making life easier for his family and friends. And the EMOTIONS. We've got a lot to work with here.

As for the rest of them...Let's just say things are going to get painful now that I really know them all.


4. Has your novel surprised you in any way?

Probably mostly in that it's taken on far more of a group ensemble feel than I was originally expecting! I was fully expecting this to center on Estelle, with only some side focus--but I guess having 6 main POVs will do that to you, haha. 


5. Have you come across any problem areas?

Keeping the plotting tight is always a problem for me, but goodness knows that's what editing is for. Sometimes I get carried away in characters' minds and forget to actually do things with them. Gotta work on this.


6. What’s been your biggest victory with writing this novel at this point?

I'm actually writing in college! This is a major accomplishment--normally I suck at actually getting words down at school. So the fact that I've written 80k in just a few months here at school already...dude. This is magic. This book is actually going to be something.


7. If you were transported into your novel and became any one of the characters, which one do you think you’d be? Would you take any different actions than they have?

If I were in my novel...probably...I'd probably be Yelena, one of my side characters, and I would make VERY different decisions. Haha. I love Yelena, but she is not the queen of good decisions.

8. Give us the first sentence or paragraph then 2 (or 3!) more favorite snippets!

The first few lines: 

If killing were a prize to be won, she’d have the first-place trophy. Both for quality and quantity.

Estelle slipped through the shadows, her hood drawn up over her face to conceal it. The streets were empty this late at night; only a few windows still burned with lights, and those few would soon go out. It was raining, as it almost always did at night; the moisture made her skin feel alive. It would water the earth and give new life to the weeds bursting through the cracks in the cobblestones.

Estelle shook her head, letting raindrops cascade down her back. The darkness was hardy enough of a cover, but she didn’t care anymore. A shiver slid down her spine.

And let's see...snippets are hard to come by because this is REALLY a first draft, but I'll find some.

Leaning forward, she considered herself in the mirror. White powder, almost as pale as her face, was the first thing to go on. She brushed it on, then turned to the pink powder that she rubbed into her cheeks. If only they could look like this naturally. She rubbed it onto her skin and sat back to consider. Was this her mother’s face or her father’s?
She couldn’t remember. She’d been four the last time she’d seen them, and it wasn’t like she remembered much from that time. Only that she’d terrified the entire town, and the authorities hadn’t liked it. Her parents hadn’t either. That’s why they’d taken her away.
Estelle pressed down on her cheeks, scrubbing the pink into her skin. The stain showed up far too dark in the mirror. She sighed. Frustration wasn’t the way to go about putting on her morning makeup. Eye makeup was all she had left, and that wouldn’t take long. She reached for her eye shadow, to paint dark circle onto the top of her eyes that would distract the world from her sleepless ones. They had only gotten worse since the accident.
She took a deep breath and paused.

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Zayn took in a deep breath. His cape flapped behind him as he walked. A cold, cold wind was sweeping gray clouds over the faint sun. The coast was about fifty miles away, but he’d been there a few times, enough to know that living this far north with this much wind did not create good weather near the sea. The winter was coming. Already it was the tenth month.
He did not want to think about what the arrival of winter would do. He needed to get a scarf and a jacket to wear with his cloak. He shivered and pulled his coat tighter around himself. It wasn’t a terribly warm jacket, but it was enough to keep him going.
He stalked into the town, and the people parted like a sea to let him pass. Their eyes found him, following him as he went by, like he was some kind of monster. The weight of the stares rested on his shoulders like the world itself sat there. He swallowed hard, but he could not make himself smile. If only he’d been charismatic. If only he could have waved and let the people know he was going forth on an errand that would set them free. But he could not do that.
His errand was grim, and until he found the freedom that would come from accomplishing his task, he would be grim.


9. Share an interesting tidbit about the writing process so far! (For example: Have you made any hilarious typos? Derailed from your outline? Killed off a character? Changed projects entirely? Anything you want to share!)

Well...I thought I knew how this duology ended. I knew what all the characters were doing, what their final positions were going to be, and everything in between. But then I was thinking about it and went... What if I did not do that?

I swear I do this every time.

But here we are, and I'm super super excited about the way this is going now! We're going to THRIVE, y'all. I realized how little I was invested in these characters (because I knew how it was going to end), and I decided that something needed to be done. And now I am FLYING, and I've rarely been so excited about character development as I am with this crew now. Estelle, Tristan, Zayn, and the rest of the crew are my favorite characters ever now. No exaggeration. (And I hope someday y'all love them as much as I do!)

10. Take us on a tour of what a normal writing day for this novel looks like. Where do you write? What time of day? Alone or with others? Is a lot of coffee (or some other drink) consumed? Do you light candles? Play music? Get distracted by social media (*cough, cough*)? Tell all!

I have to dig time out for this novel from the pit of school, so it usually ends up with me either sitting in my bunk bed or my study cubicle, pounding out words while avoiding eye contact with my physics textbook. I drink lots of water. I blast music in my earbuds, whatever happens to be the vibe of the day, and I go. That's...about it. This hasn't been an aesthetic or cute process--it's been ugly, tired, and sleep-deprive. But the book is BEING WRITTEN. And I am in love with it.


How is your current writing going? Talk to me in the comments! I want to hear about ALL the WIPs!

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11 comments

  1. 98K? Congratulations!! That's awesome! Especially writing in college--I definitely know what a challenge that is.

    Ooh, a character with a fantasy Ph.D. equivalent working in assassin clans? SIGN ME UP IMMEDIATELY.

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    1. I'm so excited that I got to this point!!!! Thank you!

      YES! Aver is my favorite.

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  2. Aaahhhh Faith! This all makes me SO HAPPY. A thousand congrats on reaching nearly 100k while in COLLEGE. That is absolutely amazing. And I can't tell you how thrilled it makes me to hear how deeply you've connected with this story and these characters. That is SAYING something that they're your favorite! But my goodness is it the best feeling when we land on a story that means that much to us. What a blessing this one has become that for you!

    From what you've shared it sounds absolutely amazing (but I mean OF COURSE, it's a Faith story so clearly it's epic!) and I cannot wait to learn more one day.

    I do hope the writing continues to go wonderfully! Thank you so much for joining part 2 and sharing this with us. <3

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    1. Thank you!!! It's so exciting to have written this much ^_^ I love this story so much and I'm so excited to have made so much progress!

      I'm so excited to share more!!!

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  3. This sounds like SO much fun to write (and read!!!). I love the line about avoiding eye contact with your physics textbook. XD Relatable for sure.

    I hope the rest of the writing process continues to be wonderful for you!

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  4. AHH practically 100k (probably past that by now) already!! Amazing!! Especially since you're in college :0 Also very encouraging to know that it is possible to be human AND write in college, phew.

    Also, love those snippets! And I'm even more intrigued about those characters now! And! Just, all the excitement xDDD I hope you have great fun with the rest of this novel!!

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    1. I passed it yes! I'm so excited about all of this and also that discovery, haha.

      Thank you!!!

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  5. Oh, I am so excited for you!!!! 98,000 words while in school! Dude, that is the HUGEST accomplishment!

    This story sounds fantastic, and I love the opening line

    Also, 100% feel knowing where you were going and then going "well, what if we didn't do that?" I'd fully outlined my NaNo story, but wasn't feeling the outline... so now we're doing something different. They'll still end up in similar places, but there's a lot of stuff I was planning to put in, that's now ending up in a different direction. :p

    Hope it's going well! Finish strong!

    Alexa
    alexa-thusfar.blogspot.com

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