Know the Novel Part 3: It's Late, but I Finished Pentegreens 1!

by - January 13, 2025

Hey guys! I am VERY late on this linkup, but here I am anyway to say that I finished my rewrites of my novel, The King's Daughter, and I'm ready to scream hysterically about it. I am IN LOVE WITH THESE IDIOTS. tHAT IS ALL.

Some stats:

  • 331 pages (down from 410)
  • 90,401 words (down from 120k in the earliest draft)
  • Same number of chapters somehow? 
  • D R A M A
  • Infinite levels of love triangle shenanigans 
  • The characters need Help 

 1. How did writing this novel go all around?

It was...fun. Scary, but fun. Dismantling something this close to my heart was really hard, and I struggled to know how to make it amazing. But eventually I realized I loved it, and how much more fun and fulfilling this story is. I loved writing this so much, and rewriting it as a grownup...so so fun.

2. Did it turn out as you expected or completely different? How do you feel about the outcome?

It's SO different and in the best possible way. I am obsessed with my characters. I'm obsessed with the story. I love this so so much. 

3. What aspect of the story did you love writing about the most? (Characters, plot, setting, prose, etc.)

The characters, always. There is no competition. I adore these characters with my entire heart. Esma is still my kind, strong girl. Rishatta is a tortured but sassy but special little guy. The side characters are the kings and queens of my heart and I can't wait to see them take over the story in the later books. 

4. What was your least favorite part?

Figuring out how to foreshadow later things without fully giving the plot away. It was SO HARD this time around. I know how things end this time, which I didn't when I initially wrote this book. In 2017, when I wrote the very first draft of TKD, I was still figuring out who the Big Bad was and what he wanted. This time around, I know, and I know who the twist characters are and the side characters who do insane things and just in general the whole story. It makes it hard to guess how much people will see and how much they'll be surprised by. I'm okay if people put pieces together, but I don't want things to be /too/ obvious, ya know? The writer's massive struggle. Anyway.

5. What do you feel needs the most work?

Rishatta (the MMC) and his dad's relationship. His dad used to be a very stereotypical caricature villain and is now...not either of those things, and I don't really think I got the dynamic right this time around. Le sigh. I suppose we shall See. 

6. How do you feel about your characters now? Who’s your favorite? Least favorite? Anyone surprise you? Give us all the details!

My favorite currently? Always and forever Rishatta. He's my boi. He's the love of my life in a fantasy context. I adore him. But there are a few of others who have appeared and have shocked me--mostly villains. Rishatta's evil father, Burashna, and the sort of vaguely manic female assassin Elensha, specifically. The two of them? Oh my gosh. Good heavens. They are so much more interesting than they've ever been before. Elensha has become far more violent and dangerous, but also her motivations have gotten so much more intense and I think she may just be my absolute favorite character at this point. And Burashna...as stated above, he needs some help, but we're going to deal with it. 

7. What’s your next plan of action with this novel?

Let it simmer, do some mild fixes, and then send it into the world for the beta/critique readers! 

8. If you could have your greatest dream realized for this novel, what would it be?

I would love for this book to be the next Harry Potter sized phenomena, honestly. Crazy dream? Yes. Yes, it is. But I am nothing at all if not DELULU. 

9. Share some of your favorite snippets!

He didn’t get angry. Not easily. Fury didn’t burn in his veins. But right now, he was as angry as he could be for someone made of ice. The cold surged against his hands, settling comfortably against his fingertips, where he could call it up at a moment’s notice. Inside him, it screamed, bashing its icy fists against the windowpane of his mind. One especially hard hit and the glass would shatter.

Whisper, he thought to his power, as he had so often. Hush. Breathe.

The icy hands shrank back, but they still knocked. He took a deep breath and made himself ignore them. More important things occupied him.

Elensha was no longer where he’d left her. He turned left at the place he’d last seen her and marched toward the end of the row. She had no tent of her own, no possessions, nothing except herself and that bottle of alcohol she carried with her everywhere she went.

But there she was, at the end of the row where she liked to sit, unconscious on the grass. Three glass bottles, empty, surrounded her.


~

“Listen, little princess.” Elensha leaned in even closer. “I hate you. I hate you very much. Nothing will change that. You don’t want me to kill you or hurt you. I know that. But that’s your only option, lovie. If you don’t disappear I’m going to have to break you. Slowly. I hate you.” Her breath came faster and the words came between her teeth. “You are everything I hate and there is nothing I want more than to watch you die. Make things easier. Go away. Disappear or die or something so then I don’t have to do it and waste myself on your blood.”
Esma took in a deep breath and then another. She just had to go somewhere else. Anywhere else. “The general and Lord Dauthang don’t want you to kill me,” she said. “You wouldn’t want that.”
Elensha laughed out loud. “Lord Dauthang,” she sang in a mocking lilt. “Little Lord Dauthang, out to ruin lives and destroy everyone. Let’s just assume for the moment, Lord Dauthang and General Burashna are completely irrelevant. Whether you live or die is up to me and no one else, little princess. And I want you to die.”

~

“I think you care more than you let on.” Esma squinted at him. “Not about me, of course. That would require you to have a heart.”
The general raised an eyebrow without looking up from his paperwork. “Enlighten me, little princess. Whatever could it be that I care so deeply about?”
“That’s what I’m trying to figure out.” She had to be careful how she went about this, but if she found some things out, maybe she could even say that this situation had been worthwhile. “I don’t think it’s Dauthang, either. You care about something else entirely. Is it…” Slowly, dramatically, she raised a hand to her mouth and gasped. “Oh. Oh!”
The general peered over his inkwell again and waited, eyebrow still raised.
“I think I have it!” She clutched her chest for an invisible strand of pearls. “It’s—it’s you! You care so much about yourself!”
The general’s hand hit the table. “Thank you, little princess, for that fascinating piece of information,” he said, his voice dry. “I would never have otherwise guessed. Have you any further enlightenment for me?”


10. Did you glean any new writing and/or life lessons from writing this novel?

Nothing huge, except that I can let my stories take on fresh new life and become something beautiful. I was holding on so tight to this book, afraid to let it change at all, and now...it's become something more than it ever could've been under my fifteen year old self. She's taken great care of this story, but now it's time to let it go even further.


So that's my story! So excited to be sharing more about it, and I hope I'll have more to share as we continue :D

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1 comments

  1. AAAAHHHHH!!! SO MANY CONGRATS. I was just over here behind the screen BEAMING while reading this. I know this story is so special and the story of your heart, and I'm just delighted and so proud of you for continuing to give it the love and attention it deserves. That is wonderful it has turned out so well!

    I was LIVING for the snippets. My goodness, the characters truly are so ALIVE. The FIRE of Elensha. We love to see it. And Esma's sass in that last snippet? Yesss. I am here for ALL of this.

    Congratulations again on finishing the rewrites. Thank you for joining Know the Novel and sharing with us! I'm cheering you on, friend, as you continue with this special story. <3

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