Meet my New WIP: A Chill Unbroken (A Novella! Whuuut)
I have a new WIP to introduce to y'all today! Woohoo!!!!!!
I haven't mentioned my WIP for the 100-for-100 yet this year. But that's okay--I'm going to talk about it now!!!! ^_^
I've been hoping to write some novellas based on Pentegreen Series characters for a long time, and with this Go Teen Writers challenge, I've finally found the perfect chance to do so. So far I'm loving working on this world--it's set in a very different place from the body of the Pentegreen series, but there ARE some very, very familiar characters taking the center stage. Because this novella is a backstory novella for everyone's favorite...
Rishatta Woods!
*ducks to hide from the insane level of shrieking* pwease don't hurt me
But anyway, back to about this novella...I decided to write a backstory about my smol sad bean boi. Because I needed to know it, partially...it's definitely easier to write a story that's heavy on backstory when you actually, erm, know the character's backstory. And Rishatta hasn't had an easy time of it.
This is a first for me in a lot of ways. My first time writing a novella with the same characters, but a different story. My first time doing a prequel. My first time attempting a tragedy.
This is a novella of firsts, too. First love, first heartbreak, first kisses, first rebellion, first attempts. Because nobody's story begins at the start of the Pentegreen series. Everyone's pasts are incredibly important, which I delve into in the later books of the series...but also here. Because I'm an indecisive goldfish. Anyway.
Have a blurb, some aesthetics, and a couple of snippets!
Blurb
Snippets
Rishatta Woods chuckled out loud, which only made the storm clouds above his sister’s brow grow darker. “Oh, Anns, Father would never really kill me. He might get close. But I don’t think he himself is actually capable of doing a deed like that.”
“Really?” Anna shook her head. “He’s killed traitors for less.”
“So I’m a traitor now?”
She stared out the window again without response. Rishatta sighed and put the book down, which was letting her win. He didn’t really care; few could best Anna Woods at her own game. She was fifteen. She was power. She was absolutely ruthless. She took that from their father.
The Characters
Rishatta Woods
His mental mask slid into place. He was here to bring honor to their father, nothing more. If he ran into his friends, that would be nice. But he was here for his father and his family’s name and their repute as the highest family of Venaria. In Lascogine, he would have been a prince. Here, he could be no less.
Anna Woods
Anna cupped her chin in her hands and batted her eyelashes pleadingly. “Father!” She glanced up at Rishatta. “He’s a stone wall.”
Rishatta sighed and braced himself. For her sake rather than his own he hoped Burashna would look up, pay them a bit of attention, because he didn’t want to see what Anna would say to get Burashna’s attention. She was absolutely fearless. She was brutal.
She had no tact.
Alanna
The candlelight reflected in her eyes, sparkling in the light of a thousand stars. And her aura—it was warm. Warmth radiated from her, filling him, touching his heart so that he shivered, aware of his own chill for the first time in years. He couldn’t remember the last time he’d been so cold—and yet he could only feel it because of the warmth.
Shai took his place on Rishatta’s right and walked beside him at an easy lope. This was his house and he could afford to be sloppy, although Rishatta had never once seen Shai be sloppy. His masks were easy and graceful, but masks nonetheless.
Burashna Woods
For whatever reason, Anna truly had allowed herself to hope that today, just once, Father would pay attention to them and act like he actually cared. He didn’t. That was the long and short of it. He didn’t care, and Rishatta had no idea what he could possibly do to make him care.
“Do you want to complain as well, boy?” Burashna didn’t even look at him.
Additional lyrics:
We're sleepin' through all the days//I'm actin' like I don't see every ribbon you use to tie yourself to me//Lorde
We're going down, down in an earlier round//but sugar, we're going down swinging//Fall Out Boy
This town ain't big enough for two of us//I don't have the right name or the right looks//but I have twice the heart//Fall Out Boy
We'll be the greatest, they'll hang us in the Louvre//down the back, but who cares? Still the Louvre.//Lorde
Why didn't I just take back everything I said to you//take back everything I put you through//why didn't I tell you?//For King and Country
Also, I retitled book 3 of the Pentegreen series! I realized that while I liked The Winter's Chill, but it didn't fit with the rest of the series. So after some brainstorming with the amazing Nicki Chapelway, I decided to give book 3 a new title, which is:
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AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH *screams into eternity*
ReplyDeleteAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *also screams*
DeleteIf you hear screaming right now, that’s me because OH MY GOODNESS RISHATTA IS GETTING HIS OWN NOVELLA AND I NEED TO READ THIS RIGHT NOW.
ReplyDeleteSee? Screaming! ;)
But this sounds so STINKING GOOD and I LOVE THE NEW TITLE FOR PENTEGREENS 3 and this post is just FULL OF AWESOMENESS.
I think I can hear very faint and vague screaming...*smirks* Hopefully it'll be done soon! Eventually! XD
DeleteThank you so much Nicole!!!!!!! You're so sweet! <3
What is this???? Sad? Full of firsts? Amazing, unique names that can actually be pronounce? The perfect title? A novella to boot? I'm in love!!!!
ReplyDeleteAnd yeah, I'm doing the 100 for 100 and LOVING it.
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OH MY WORD KETURAH THIS COMMENT MADE MY DAY *cries* *flails* You are SO SWEET OH MY WORD <33333
DeleteIt is just me, or are there some "Romeo and Juliet" vibes here??
ReplyDeleteLooks great!!! Can't wait to read your book(s) sometime and learn about all these characters!
Not intentionally! But now that you say it...yeah, I can see that to some extent xD Although no one dies...yet...xD
DeleteThank you! I hope you can read them someday soon!
*Eternal screaming*
ReplyDeleteThis. ISSSSSS. Beautiful.
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*joins you in screaming* THANK YOUUUUUUUUU
DeleteI am going to use "my smol sad bean boi" now. Thank you for the phrase! :)
ReplyDeleteBackstory is always so sad, but I love that you are doing this. Way to go, girl!!!! And it is about "my smol sad bean boi"!!! This will answer all of my questions!!! I don't know who he is, but I like Shai already. :)
THE NEW TITLE = PERFECTION!!! Yay!!!!! I'm so happy that it is focusing on Derek!!!!!!!
Heheheheh excellent you should ;)
DeleteIt's sad for sure, but I'm pretty excited about this! It should answer at least a few questions xD Shai is pretty fun.
YAY!!!!! I love that it focuses on Derek too. Now to just rewrite the book...*winces*
Rishatta!!!! My son, you treat him right, ya hear? Or I will come and take him to come stay with me. Ya know I'm doing the 100-for-100 ;P
ReplyDeleteAnd obviously I love that title but it needs to be said again XD
You'll probably need to come and take him away from me...I don't deserve that precious child.
DeleteOh yes. How's that been going, actually? XD
GOOD xD ya better seeing as you helped come up with it...*eye roll*
*SCREAMS FOR A THOUSAND BILLION YEARS* RISHATTA BACKSTORY NOVELLA. DREAMS DO COME TRUE. (Although I'm 10000% sure this will destroy us ALL.)
ReplyDeleteOh my gracious that blurb, girl. DAT BLURB. It is SO well written. Even if I didn't know Rishatta, I'd be completely and utterly hooked by it!
And all these snippets! So much Woods drama. I LOVE IT. XDD
Alsoooo the new Book #3 title is FABULOUS!!!! I AM IN LOVE. And it's a nod to DEREK MAH BOY THIS MAKES ME SO HAPPYYYY.
Ahem. Okay. I am done screaming now. (But Rishattaaaa.)
*JOINS YOU IN SCREAMING* Agh I'm so happy you're excited!!!!! (Although yeah it's 10/10 going to destroy everyone once it's actually edited and I let anyone read it lolz)
DeleteAGH THANK YOU. I was so worried about that blurb but THIS IS SUCH AN ENDORSEMENT. <3
I know xD I enjoy writing their family dynamic waaaaay too much. Whoops. I'm probably an awful person.
YAY! And also YES DEREK <33333333 MY LOVE.
Thank you so much for this beautiful flaily comment! <333
OH MY GOSH I AM SO EXCITED FOR THIS YOU HAVE NO IDEA.
ReplyDeleteAHHHHHH THAT MAKES ME SO HAPPY
DeleteI NEED THIIIIIIIIIS.
ReplyDeleteEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
DeleteThis sounds absolutely amazing! And Rish is in it!!!!
ReplyDeleteAlso love your use of Taylor Swift songs.
Thank you!!!
DeleteAlso yes! XD
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